The extravagance of a memory

Tell her children that her dragon lives... O

Odysseus

Rider of waves

You planted the seed of the city

And graced its gardens

With seven stones from the sun   

Even then my angel walked the earth

Translucent light was she

With burning wings

And she knew I was no man

But an untamed beast

A savage creature of fire

That only she could soothe

In the music of her halcyon lullabies

Then they came

The rancorous binding ones

And they shackled her

In those dark chains of reputation

Cursing her wild wings

Her soul caged

Odysseus

 Tell her children

That her dragon lives

And will come to her side

That she will one day fly free

For I know that I do not exist

Except in the extravagance of her memory

Author's Note

“I’m beginning to know myself… I do not exist…” – Alvaro de Campos

Reviews

[alice]

I love this:

"That her dragon lives
And will come to her side
That she will one day fly free"

I am of opinion that you should write a novel. A fantasy novel or a romance novel. Both? They don't have to be mutually exclusive.

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, such a joy to see you by again! Thank you! And such precious words of light. I am actually sending my fantasy novel to publishers now... and working on my romance novel. Hope this year the doors open. My soul needs some light. :)

[alice]

OMG!!!! Words cannot describe how ecstatic I am!!!! That is so amazing, I cannot wait.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you! I will try and fulfill your wondrous expectations... :)

[Ovi-Odiete]

Gloriously Phenomenal....
A great piece.

[An owl on the moon]

Truly appreciate your kind words. :)

[Ovi-Odiete]

My Pleasure......

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, you do tell such good stories....we get lost in the tale, absorbed in the poetic journey, wishing this place in our minds actually existed in the real world.

[softlyfall]

Who is to say they don't? I have trouble accepting the consensus reality..well the consensus anything, to be honest. Who is to say these journeys of mind are not every bit as real?

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you for your comments here so much, and for exploring my words and these worlds of meaning. Some metaphors, and some... well some are pure magic aren't they. Places deeper than the shallows of this world. :)

[softlyfall]

The captive angel harboring the memory of dragon fire, and this remembered dragon as protagonist from the shadows...this is splendid and mature storytelling, excellent poetry.
This is you.
That much is clear.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, dear poet. Yes, you read it well. All based on a true story; a story still endlessly unfolding.

[Adam Adams]

The choice of title's way Translucent. Speaks many things throu' the essence of your holy-words. Liked the story-line of your poetry, moreover the theme of: "Odysseus" - the legend of legend...

.. no matter what you do with love, life, & to the fantasies you might've been fantasized with since 'eons, time ain't give a damn 'bout things you whirl around. Odysseus was himself a great artistic and heroic spirit, of course, xcross the world, but today, he's all turned to a wisp - a fog - just an "Extravagance" of memories in memories, however, the essence - the worth of his life's still impacting many hearts just like it did to you. You capture many panoramic type of things in few creative-ripples of words with your poetic-simplicity which got me... studying "Odysseus" more in depths. Very touching poetry you just come up with.

The way you write or the things you implant deep in your stuffs (with the depths of "classic-thoughts") is what makes me reading your poetry (and prose, of course) with honor so i guess, i've really had a great time with your poetry, as always i've...

.. furthermore, i must admire you for your creative sense of humor as well that got you writing "Author's Note" ... yeah, it's gently merged with your poetry & the title you chose working/writing on. Ah, ev'n the quote speaking the course of "The Extravagance Of Memories". Excellent! What a beautiful poetry!

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, my friend, what an amazing, insightful commentary! Though often my poetry is fairly simple and straightforward, with this one I had mysteries floating in my soul that needed release. I am on a journey home, and the glimpses of it are becoming more clear with each day. And that fierce discoverer, Odysseus, left a path for me to wander to my destiny. I'll give you a call when I get home. :)

[softlyfall]

Your poetry is in no way simple, nor straightforward. Humility is a grace but self denigration denies your gift and your power. Stand up tall and announce your gift, ask all to read your words and read into their complexity and innate understanding of the flow of time and life.

[softlyfall]

You are an excellent poet, one of the two best I have read so far on this site

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

So tuned always in thought....I am not surprised I found this here, you here in forum with memories....I hear each world,see each manifestation and know I have wandered into like kingdoms...been at battles...listened to tears and seranades. I'll walk with you dear friend for the kinship is uncanny and the journey too long and treacherous to walk alone....for no man or woman should ever just look and see less than three sets of prints or two empty hands. Namaste!

[An owl on the moon]

Dear Queenie, how your words always lift me and my everlasting wandering soul. I believe I might find my way home this year... somehow. Joy to you now, and a new year of such endless blessings. Namaste!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Oh well done1 In my humble opinion this is a very good poem. One does not need to know the mythology. The poem stands on its own.

[An owl on the moon]

Your kindness is so lifting. Thank you dear poet. A happy new year to you. :)

[Seriana]

My own words have escaped me. This is fabulous Craig!!! Your vivid imagery is met with heartfelt emotion and the feelings portrayed here are intense. This is amazing. Truly one of my favorite of yours. The ending is perfect. Thanks for starting out the new year with your fantastical words!

[An owl on the moon]

So glad you came by, Seriana! Happy New Year! Appreciate you stopping here these last years, and always lifting me. Is there someone like this in your life? One by whom your whole world is defined? If so, hold tight, through hell and high water.