Love speaks...

A contest collaboration with Emma...

 

Love speaks to me in many different tongues
And you, dear one, are master of them all.

You, quixotic daring rolling rhyme of life,
Exotic palm swept by sun’s warm eloquence.

In beds of yellow zinnias rich with scent
You speak to me of sweet ambrosia’s flower.

Let me sip deep your heart’s immortal wine
As orchids blush pink to see your radiance.

Whispers sweet like alpine meadows call
From rolling plains proclaim truly eternal bliss.

Ever-flowering world of dream’s delight:
My lover’s touch, my darling’s kiss...

 

Reviews

[Jeanmarie Flaherty]

Oh my goodness, I love this!! It's that sweet dream you have during a summer afternoon nap, when you wake up to slight beads of sweat and a dropping sun, toes dancing lazily with sheets and a sleepy kiss.

I cannot explain the beauty here, my Dear Craig, this is incredible!!!!!


all my love an adoration.
jmm.

[Khaaki]

wow i really loved it... d metaphors u used were awesome... I've sipped deep from d beauty of your poem... great poem...

[cest la vie]

Simply put, Lazily beautiful..This is so full of richness, color, emotion I instantly felt relaxed reading. What a wonderful poem you and Emma wrote. More, More!!

[Karen666]

You are very good in collaborting with other writers. It must be great to not fight while you both write lol.. i love this poem

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A great collaboration. Congratulations on your fourth place win.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the He-Said-She-Said contest!

Sal

[Fran Marie]

Let me sip deep your heart's immortal wine
As orchids blush pink to see your radiance.

Sheer Beauty abounds in poetic verse in this lovely Collaborated piece

A wonderful blending of inks you two!! WeLL DonE! I say!

THanks for sharing in the He Said/She Said Contest
Fran Marie

[Wildfleour]

So precious, especially the last line.

[Brianna Brie]

Your poetry is like a warm gentle breeze. Beautifully written!

[Seriana]

My word this is lovely! I can inhale the lovely fragrance wafting by me in your wonderful collaboration. Thank you for teaming up you two! What a fabulous piece!

[just is]

This is a a very beuatiful and wonderful collab. I like this.