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Jennie

 

woman at my second Korn concert

            blue bathroom stall open door

 

chick from Summer Sanitarium 2003

            heels on the floor

 

girl with right shoulder dragon tattoo before 10 Years set

            brick wall 20 feet down the alley

 

Samantha

 

 

Dry lips, dry hands, short nails you set a standard back against library wall

 

she thinks she’s my first kiss      (check line 1)

 

i was barely 14

 

your girl could’ve joined

 

I’d still         f**k you             what’s left is margin occupation

 

. 10:5?PM Tue 04/14/10 (Written, Frank)


© 2010 Tenten



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I LOVE this piece! It's completely awesome. firstly.... I love that you only have two names vs the tons of descriptions... The blunt ending is rather juicy. I really like my overall impression which comes down to.... once the chemicals are released... they never do get bottled back up, do they?? Excellent write.

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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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