She

Poem One

Boy

Cute

Hi

Flirt

Date

Night

Wrong

Alone

Bed

Guilt

Again

Satisfaction

Again

Again

Pregnant

Abandoned

Abortion

Guilt

Insane

Gun

Suicide

Reviews

[Patrick]

my first reaction was awful..then sort of laughed..now thinking..so well done for getting a reaction :)

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Allyson Wolfe]

It's unique, provactive and most definitely a powerful way to describe something. Great work! I will be checking more into this series!

[Steven Cash]

Yea thanks

[Kelsey]

I never in a million years would have thought to do something like this. Such a unique idea with a story to tell.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Kelsey. Glad you enjoyed

[Cherylann]

21 words that create such an intense story !! I love this !!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Adam Crate]

Very interesting technique you used and it worked out very well. Great read! Gotta love the darker side of reality.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks so much!

[Mani Kline]

I know a girl who is at the satisfaction stage. I hope things don't spin out of control. I love the simple way the words convey a whole story.

[Steven Cash]

Are you the girl? lol thanks for reading

[Mani Kline]

Oh No! Im the good one out of our relationship :).
No Problem!

[Suavis_Umbra]

packs the punch , with just a few words you described modern society. bravo XD XD

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[.]

Loved it! One word poems rock! 100000/100 :) oppss...I put too many zeros :)

[Steven Cash]

Its ok lol

[.]

:)

[Ees]

fantastic poem, man!
I love the extreme simplicity!!! Using only one word per line you took us on a legit journey through a situation. You made us feel sad, and all of those words. This was really, really well done!!!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks so much

[Nautili]

whoa....
sad.

[Steven Cash]

Yep thanks for reading