Blinded "Love"

Blinded "Love"

A Poem by Chelsea
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Losing virginity.

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Blinded "Love"

Love penetrates her eyes

Poking the pupils

Her eyes roll away

 

Her vision of reality, gone

His devious moves

A game of checkers

 

He gets what he wants

While she barely knows what's going on

A game of checkers gone sour

 

He leaves her

Taking a piece of her with him

That, she never, will retrieve.


© 2011 Chelsea



Author's Note

Chelsea
For any of those woman/girls that have been tricked into losing their virginity. I wrote this mainly for a friend, but figured I'd share.
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its sad how most men think, because there's more to loving a woman than sex you have to be ready to love everything about her, the good and the bad before you take that step to become one. Thank you for sharing I think you've done a great job in bringing this piece together.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Its beautiful and heartbraking all in one small slice of wonderous writing. It makes me care for an unreal victim.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Really lovely and sad!

Posted 6 Years Ago


its sad how most men think, because there's more to loving a woman than sex you have to be ready to love everything about her, the good and the bad before you take that step to become one. Thank you for sharing I think you've done a great job in bringing this piece together.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's really good. It almost happened to me. Luckily I realized what i was getting into before things got out of hand.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem brings a tear to the eyes. Girls should always becareful of, "Mr. I will love you forever, I can't wait! If you really love me you'll do this for me" Those b******s should be shot, a womans virginity is a precious gemstone, not to be stolen by some bandit, but protected and cherished by the true love it was meant for. This was beautiful in a bitter sort of way. An excellent write, and to all the women and girls who were cheated of their treasure, I am so sorry



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ha! Many women would agree with this poem. A bad game of checkers. I guess love puts blinders on us sometimes. It can happen to men too. Cute poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These are guys or men who give us A bad name very nice poem but so sad

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could tell this poem was about a girl being tricked out of her virginity. Very sad.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it.
"He leaves her
Taking a piece of her with him
That, she never, will retrieve."
great lines....
there will always be guys who would lie to innocent girls just to get laid leaving us girls clueless and unable to trust ever again.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some people are more about game than about an emotional connection. the younger you are the worse it is in my opinion. This poem conveys your thoughts very clearly and the flow is easy to follow.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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