Mother of Pearl

A lantern poem about a pearl.

Pearl

Circle

Of white love

Chosen for you

Gift

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this great winning poem. Well Done!

[alesuriko]

It's a little bland and well lacking in my opinion. The first four lines seem to flow and be connected in a fragmented sentence but the last word is too abrupt it feels and doesn't suit the ending.

[Marie Harrison]

This is a lanterne poem about the mother of pearl. It's a poem about a lover giving his sweetheart a gift. A token of his love, symbolizing his pure feelings of love for her and their future together.

[Mauricio Montoya]

awesome