for Jen, my love

For my baby.

a girl i’d just met,

much to my surprise,

drilled a hole in my heart,

with electric brown eyes,

and a stare laced with longing,

so pure, no disguise,

i could lie there beside her,

awake ‘til sunrise,

 

my lips on her skin,

my fears left behind,

our hearts and our spirits

so sweetly combined,

in dark, early hours,

entranced and entwined,

shake the dust off our souls,

our stars are aligned.

-CV

Reviews

[Riverdance]

Very romantic!

Thanks for entering in the Move Me contest.

~Rd

[Phil Sanders]

Delightfully written ....

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

' shake the dust off our souls, our stars are aligned'..
love that line ..
this is a beautiful and sensual poem of love..

Chloe
xoxo

[Brenda Sue]

Wonderfully written. I love these lines;

my lips on her skin,
my fears left behind,
our hearts and our spirits
so sweetly combined,
in dark, early hours,
entranced and entwined,
shake the dust off our souls,
our stars are aligned

wonderful words, so romance and loving. Great write.