Deep Winter

Deep Winter

A Poem by George Love
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Winter

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Deep Winter
 
Cold breaks the wind from north
Chasing warmth far off its course
Hiding light from creatures all
 
No warmth one finds
And matters of faith
Still deeply hide within that cold
And tales from past once more told
 
Can one escape the icy grasp
Of howling winds that make one gasp
And chill to core the once warm heart?
 
In dark the deep winter now hides
Its face once mocking all to stand
Once more to blast from all sides
As she breaks and forces the hand
 
North winds blast within that night
And stand so weakly those without might
So cold breaks that winter wind.
 
 
 

© 2008 George Love


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I really like the imagery in this piece and the flow was good too overall a very nice write here... fav lines....Can one escape the icy graspOf howling winds that make one gaspAnd chill to core the once warm heart?......... thanks for entering this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your ideas are good, your thoughts behind this are equally great, and the visions it provokes are chilling and cold - all it should do yes, but the rhythm and the rhyme is not really good. I reread it and it becomes better, but still not as good as it should be. I can't help it, but I cannot tell you why this is so - are your lines too long - are they too short I don't know what would do the trick.
The piece in itself is good. Keep writing and you will find the right path ...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 5, 2008

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George Love
George Love

Murfreesboro, TN



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