'Mortal's End'

'Mortal's End'

A Poem by costa siwale

the inevitable ending


s you would,
Poison my mind, sweet sin!
And lay me in the ground,
against my will.
To coldness,
and darkness.
To only these things.

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© 2016 costa siwale

Author's Note

costa siwale
your comments, critics are all welcome

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hmm i really like the whole piece i just feel like you could go even further but overall a great write if you feel that way too feel free to ask for my assistance if you want to i would be glad to help but in all likelihood it was most likely the intention and i just have not seen the truth in the words. keep writing my friend i like your flow and style !

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1 Year Ago

sure i can give you a few lines if you like it might help inspire you here it goes i will only give .. read more
costa siwale

1 Year Ago

these are very helpful lines, you pulled the words 'out of my pen' lol. thank you for sharing your t.. read more

1 Year Ago

you are most welcome my friend they are fairly rough but i hope it is enough to get your pens ink fl.. read more
Nice read. It really caught my attention. Well penned. Keep writing and I will keep reading them.Eva

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on September 27, 2016
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costa siwale
costa siwale

Lusaka , southern region, Zambia

Am inspired by you inspirational people, and wish to satiate my ardent curiosity for poetry. add me and let's get writing. more..

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