I wanted to be....

I wanted to be....

A Poem by Council Royalty
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This is about me the Council Royalty Kid from then till now

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When I was five I wanted to be 6

When I was at school I wanted to be at home

When I was at home I wanted to be outside

When I was outside I wanted to be up to no good

When I got into trouble I wanted to pass the blame 

When it got too much I wanted to be somewhere else

When I was bullied I wanted to be bigger

When I was down I wanted to be inspired 

When I was inspired I wanted to do more

When I did more I wanted to inspire 

AND now I just want to be everything positive and more!

 

© 2009 Council Royalty


Author's Note

Council Royalty
I was always inspired to do more!

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Love this! It's really lively and vibrant. Has a real 'I've grown up but I'm still fun' feel about it. Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh! This is such amazing write here,
Such energy in this as a youth growing up!
Very well written and expressed!
Like what you have said here.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like how its colorful and I also enjoy that it reflects on when you were younger. the only funny thing I have to say is that "When you were bullied you wanted to bigger" but those that were bigger wanted to be skinnier! Good write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 18, 2009

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Council Royalty
Council Royalty

Manchester, United Kingdom



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I am a young soul with big dreams! This is new to me I have always wanted to be able to write but never really too the time out to do so, now I want to be able to express how I feel, my dreams an.. more..

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