People Open Minds

People Open Minds

A Poem by CRZ

I like open minded people.
people you can just talk to 
And not get judged or criticized
through sinners eyes

I like open minded people
conversations are never the same
atmosphere feels like a sequel
creativity they attain

Where we are aware of our differences 
where we take care of our misses and
no one disses
one another cause we are all human 
aka brothers

I like open minded people 
we rather share ideas 
help our peers 
and give advice to overcome
a certain vice and fear

I like open minded people 
cause that's when the doors of my soul
slowly opens 
I like open minded people and they like me back
well that's what I'm hoping

© 2013 CRZ



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I like open minded poets who share their core vulnerabilities so that we as other open minded poets can reach out, touch, share and compare! Your poems are gifts for us, your readers and our reviews are our gifts to you, our poet! Keep writing, CRZ, We will all keep reading!

Posted 2 Years Ago


"And not get judged or criticized
through sinners eyes" - very astute CRZ and well penned.

Posted 2 Years Ago


It is better to relate to people who are open-minded...well written.....

Posted 3 Years Ago


The last stanza makes the whole poem for me with the line--"the doors of my soul/slowly opens." Very solid this one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Yes I agree, the first stanza spoke to me :) I hate being judged especially when you think you know the person and turns out, you really don't at all.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like open minded people, too! I think we all have much more to gain if we are open-minded and truly listen to one another! Thanks for sharing this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Word! , in a place like this open minded people are just what we all want. Nicely written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


yeah I am feeling this one a lot as I read throughout it I was thinking about when people talk to me I really listen without judgement and respond back to them in the same manner and I was thinking like before I got to the last line I hope they like me too. you killed this one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


What a chill poem. You have so many reviews on this already, I feel like this one is going to get lost in there. You could definitely make more use of metaphor, symbolism, imagery, etc, but maybe this is your style, very laid back and with a generation x tone


Posted 3 Years Ago


i like those people too... well odne

Posted 3 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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