Clouds Haiku

Clouds Haiku

A Poem by Stonz P.

     in separation

 

i drink your tears when you weep

 

such is our journey


© 2017 Stonz P.



Author's Note

Stonz P.
Syllable count: 17
Syllable structure: 5-7-5

The clouds have their journey, we have ours. We must wonder do clouds drink our tears too? (when they evaporate -- or am I being too poetic here?)
Can be read L --> R and vice-versa.

P.S.: 'e-ar' is used as a diphthong, hence tears will be a 1 syllable word instead of 2.

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I really like the explanation you gave...yes, you are being too poetic , but in a good way! I, too, have always wanted to write a poem that can be read from both left and right side...this one was quite interesting...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stonz P.

1 Month Ago

I've written more Haiku/Senryu that are readable either way. You can check them out too.

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i really like this ----less is more...but a powerful punch in these three lines.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stonz P.

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Jacob. Always a pleasure to hear from you.

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Stonz P.
Stonz P.

Lakhnau, India



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Must you even try to know a soul that has nothing to confide even if you deny it the right to be a fly be free free from your questioning eyes expecting cries when the soul is nothing but a .. more..

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