After 5 Years

Not really good.

In five years

I'm not sure where I'll be.

You asked me and I'm telling you, I'm not sure where I'll be.

Sure I have hopes, goals, and dreams,

but that doesn't necessarily mean anything. 

Maybe I'll be educated, maybe I'll be across the seas,

maybe I'll have someone,

maybe it'll still be just me. 

No matter what way this goes,

or what way I go, 

I know this much,

happiness is satisfaction with life.

As long as I've got that,

I've got it all. 

Reviews

[Scarch]

Extremely hopeful poem. FabuloUs poem. All the best.

[Dimples87]

Great frame of mind. The uncertainty you created leaves you open for so much. It offers no apology for the way your life will turn out. I love this piece as well. Again, the way you ended it was amazing with mystery and the certainty of happiness. Love it. Thanks for sharing.

[D.T.]

Thank you..again.. lol.. It really means a lot to get a good review so thanks! (:

[wordman]

sounds like a good place to be,i can only be me

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I liked the logic in the words.
"happiness is satisfaction with life.
As long as I've got that,
I've got it all. "
Above lines are true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote