A NIght In Hell

A NIght In Hell

A Poem by Danny J.H.
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a poem about the dreams of the otherworld

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A Night In Hell

 

The darkness strokes my restless face

The cold air penetrates my skin

My mind is off in another place

Where I ponder dreams akin

 

My prophecies and nightmares

Greet me with a smile

Evil doings and blank stares

Stretch mile after mile

 

No wind nor stars are here tonight

In my dreamy hell

Only monsters walk in sight

Not a soul I tell

 

I am taken to manor

One-thousand chambers high

Abode of awful grandeur

Satan’s palace in the sky

 

My thoughts have turned against me

Treat me they shan’t well

I have tried and cannot flee

From this haunted hell

 

We walk down many hallways

My evil thoughts and I

We climb up many stairways

Closer to the sky


I finally meet a dwelling

Who’s doors shut out the days

I confess I shan’t be telling

But I couldn’t help but gaze

 

Satan sat upon his throne

And looked right back at me

I knew right then when his eyes shone

That I would never be free

 

So Satan rose up from his chair

And uttered an evil hiss

He ordered me into his lair

To face my final bliss

 

Around my heart I felt his hands

Begin to squeeze and creep

But in another farther land

I woke up from my sleep



© 2009 Danny J.H.



Author's Note

Danny J.H.
sorry about the font. i orginally did this in word and thought it wud look cool

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The flow of this poem is quite smooth and the rhyme and rhythm and synced together just perfectly. Brilliant imagery and vivid description helps bring the nightmare to life for any reader. Absolutely amazing work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


I enjoy of that embrace.

Posted 5 Years Ago


That was amazing:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Good use of imagery.

Posted 5 Years Ago


It's so vivid! I love it. Great use of imagery and the language is amazing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I love this poem, it really spoke to me, the flow, was flawless, the word choice was impeccable. Great job

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Posted 6 Years Ago


the flow is really good! The negative emotions really grip the readers.

Posted 6 Years Ago


love the flow and the descriptions.....very good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sweet poem

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on December 27, 2009
Last Updated on December 28, 2009
Tags: hell, poem, satan, darkness, evil, death, decay, dreams, monsters, occult, horror

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Danny J.H.
Danny J.H.

Dunwoody, GA



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Hey! My name is danny, i'm 13 years old and i am a very avid poet. more..

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