A NIght In Hell

A NIght In Hell

A Poem by Danny J.H.

a poem about the dreams of the otherworld


A Night In Hell


The darkness strokes my restless face

The cold air penetrates my skin

My mind is off in another place

Where I ponder dreams akin


My prophecies and nightmares

Greet me with a smile

Evil doings and blank stares

Stretch mile after mile


No wind nor stars are here tonight

In my dreamy hell

Only monsters walk in sight

Not a soul I tell


I am taken to manor

One-thousand chambers high

Abode of awful grandeur

Satan’s palace in the sky


My thoughts have turned against me

Treat me they shan’t well

I have tried and cannot flee

From this haunted hell


We walk down many hallways

My evil thoughts and I

We climb up many stairways

Closer to the sky

I finally meet a dwelling

Who’s doors shut out the days

I confess I shan’t be telling

But I couldn’t help but gaze


Satan sat upon his throne

And looked right back at me

I knew right then when his eyes shone

That I would never be free


So Satan rose up from his chair

And uttered an evil hiss

He ordered me into his lair

To face my final bliss


Around my heart I felt his hands

Begin to squeeze and creep

But in another farther land

I woke up from my sleep

© 2009 Danny J.H.

Author's Note

Danny J.H.
sorry about the font. i orginally did this in word and thought it wud look cool

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I enjoy of that embrace.

Posted 4 Years Ago

That was amazing:)

Posted 4 Years Ago

Good use of imagery.

Posted 4 Years Ago

It's so vivid! I love it. Great use of imagery and the language is amazing.

Posted 4 Years Ago

I love this poem, it really spoke to me, the flow, was flawless, the word choice was impeccable. Great job

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Posted 5 Years Ago

the flow is really good! The negative emotions really grip the readers.

Posted 5 Years Ago

love the flow and the descriptions.....very good.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Sweet poem

Posted 7 Years Ago

This is really good. I feel ashamed reading this since my works are nothing compared to this. XD
I love it's dark atmosphere and how well feelings and emotions are described e.g 'The cold air penetrates my skin'.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on December 27, 2009
Last Updated on December 28, 2009
Tags: hell, poem, satan, darkness, evil, death, decay, dreams, monsters, occult, horror


Danny J.H.
Danny J.H.

Dunwoody, GA

Hey! My name is danny, i'm 13 years old and i am a very avid poet. more..