my soul is green.

self.spirit.rebel.life.

...splashing it with my feet,
i am playing like a child.
jumping.
shouting..
falling in...
my soul is green
as if an ocean layered
green
as it was left for times so long
untouched.
now, i am disturbing its silence,
breaking it rather.
and it is responding to me with waves
shouting back.
a tide.
i am at my shore.
but now, going in
to feel.
to be
what i actually am.

Reviews

[Elise O'Haire]

Very nice. It seems that this has a hidden message besides how fun the ocean is. I really liked it. Thanks for entering The Water Contest.

Elise O'Haire

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Very nice, ocean of green peaceful and serene, playful like a child with joy within.