Thanks. . .

..to an old rocking chair.

...resting
in your arms,
i lived; my last years.

- at eighty two -

i felt your love
your warmth. . .
i relaxed.
~
thanks
~
you loved me.

Reviews

[Midnight Dreams]

So so cute! And so touching! one of the best from you. The last lines are ironical too.

[Abigail Alliah]

A whole story unfolds in just a few lines, and I find myself wondering what the person's life might have been. It is very, very lovely. I love the personification, that the rocking chair was a dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing!

[Michael Carr]

the punctuation and structure is a bit rough, but the piece itself is wonderfully profound, beautiful and inspiring, a real ode to lost love and the power of love eternal.
well done.

[Eldee]

This is lovely, sentimental and metaphoric.
I am the sort of person who loves symbolism, and who loves to find connection between life and the simplicity of words. This touched something inside of me- it was lovely, absolutely lovely.

[Anima Inspired]

This definitely gets at the spirit of an old rocking chair...you've managed to write something beautiful and powerful with very few words, which echos the quiet beauty of the aged. Nicely written.

[darkgurl]

This is very beautiful and ever so lovely...Kim

[!!..Love..!!]

Oh dear! this is so great, I wonder how can you write so much in depth with just few words.