At The End Of The Genesis

 

In the darkness

Invisibility becomes a ghost

With no purpose.

The stars don’t come out at night

Because space has always been their home.

When these revelations

Come into focus

The telescope becomes

A toy in Pandora’s box.

The big bang is now

A firework after the 4^th of July,

And heaven knows freedom

Is Peace’s only prayer.

Reviews

[Corset]

As I read this in front of my window, i saw a squirrel climb the the tree, (squirrel!) he caught my attention. He instinctively knows he's not invisible and so he climbs higher to safety, do we look up at the stars instinctively knowing that maybe it's safer there?

[Babbette Francis]

You know me, Cowboy, I love a good book, and the Bible is my favorite. Nice to see you, my man. I decided to pick up the pin again. feels like home. Gotta get familiar with things again. But anyway got a new post. Got time come by... Yay Coyboy's here!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well howdy stranger... so nice to hear from you. I will have to stop by your place soon.

[LazerRays]

How nice! This really grabs to me! The wording is well and makes you really ponder thought in your head. I love the ending where you state that freedom is peace's only prayer! That's so deep and i'm proud you came up with that! Talent shines through your work! Keep rebelling for good ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

WOW thank you for such a flattering review. Made me blush :)