Silent Rose

 

 

Don’t breathe, don’t speak till

the feet are in full motion

and the heart races.

Reviews

[Tim]

This reminds me of a nightmare I had where I was running from something but I didn't know what. Scary little piece. Nice.

[Desert Dreamer]

Oh, yes, there are times when we should wait.

[light and ashes]

very nicely done haiku

[Muse]

I stopped breathing...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................GASP!

Beautiful poetry!

[Hoskinsish]

Very nice haiku.

[Tina Kline]

I like this, nicely done.

[Seashell]

speaks volumes !!

[Lily Mae]

I love this..x

[Kenneth The Poet]

You are the senryu master. I grovel before thee.

[emmajoy]

Yes, says it all - and more!