In Green Pastures

In Green Pastures

A Poem by Phillitup

My mind
floats free

My soul
like a lambkin

My heart
like a dove

My feet
running far

My hand
reaching out

© 2012 Phillitup


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Phillitup
XXX 12/27/12

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I have no idea whatsoever about what a lambkin is, but I loved this :D It reminds me of a poem I had to write in fifth grade about who I was back then. I think I failed it....yeah, that sounds like me. This is so simple yet...what's the word I'm looking for? Awesome? Spectacular? FREAKING AMAZING????!!!! I don't know, you'll just have to pick. Great job on this :D :D :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you liked this! A lambkin is basically a lamb or a baby sheep.
Becca Bishop

11 Years Ago

Uh huh....so do you often feel like a baby sheep?? Just wondering. Sometimes I feel like a man-eatin.. read more
Phillitup

11 Years Ago

:)



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Reaching out for what, I wonder? Beautiful poem, just like a dream.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have no idea whatsoever about what a lambkin is, but I loved this :D It reminds me of a poem I had to write in fifth grade about who I was back then. I think I failed it....yeah, that sounds like me. This is so simple yet...what's the word I'm looking for? Awesome? Spectacular? FREAKING AMAZING????!!!! I don't know, you'll just have to pick. Great job on this :D :D :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you liked this! A lambkin is basically a lamb or a baby sheep.
Becca Bishop

11 Years Ago

Uh huh....so do you often feel like a baby sheep?? Just wondering. Sometimes I feel like a man-eatin.. read more
Phillitup

11 Years Ago

:)
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i remember those pastures.
glory, glory...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

:)

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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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