Threads

Threads

A Poem by denise
"

the ties of family

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Family

Scattered

Yet connected

Caught in a web

Threads join us

Intersect us

Bind us

Invisible

Yet steely strong

Impenetrable

Infinite

 Webs of life

© 2018 denise


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Family is strong, and distance can't keep you from loving your family, and them from loving you. Great piece.
-Richard

Posted 5 Years Ago


I suppose at one time you phoned loved ones, and you heard their voice.
Now you can see and speak to them.
Keeps us all connected.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mixed thought: are you speaking about being connected by techology - a computer perhaps.. or the incredible thread of kith and kin!? Perhaps the latter, but, whichever.. this is such a clever piece of writing, a little enigma yet those threads and webs are strong as strong can be, emotionally.

Posted 6 Years Ago


denise

6 Years Ago

Thank you - originally ....yes the thread of kith and kin but I also liked that it could be applied .. read more
great metaphor. The threads can be tangled and worn down, but always join us. Great read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


So very true. No matter how far you travel, they are always with us. Usually, mine will be telling me what im doing wrong, but family can do that :)


Posted 6 Years Ago


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Snared in a web of others making. There have been times when I've wished I were an orphan....families , can't pick 'em, just stuck with 'em.
Morning Denise

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on April 1, 2018
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