I'm a man

I'm a man

A Poem by Bare trees
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I'm
a
man.

I sit on a male can.

When
I
pee

I stand up prominently.

I
like
women

I wink at them a lot.

I
pick up
heavy
things

When I feel like it.

I
like
my
car

unless it breaks down.

then
my
wife
fixes it

but I'm still a man

no matter
what
she
says.

© 2017 Bare trees



Author's Note

Bare trees
That's me in my younger days when I was a skinny lad.

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I love the simplicity of this poem. And how you incorporate humour and rhyme. And then the rhyme is lost when the insecurities about manhood creep in. And the simplicity of language adds to the feel of innocence. As if the writer doesnt really feel a man, but more a boy pretending to be a man.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Bare trees

2 Months Ago

Thank you.
I quite like this, it looks interesting on the page

Posted 5 Months Ago


Bare trees

5 Months Ago

Thank you for liking it. :)
lol...a simple read, you described most men haha...enjoyed :) x

Posted 5 Months Ago


Bare trees

5 Months Ago

We all thank you Raven. :)
Nice. I feel I am experiencing the satisfied life of someone else. Good job!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Bare trees

5 Months Ago

You're welcome. I feel manly.
Kathleen Montgomery

5 Months Ago

I'm Glad you feel manly.
Bare trees

5 Months Ago

I'm glad I do to.
BAHAHAHAHA!!! This is awesome! Humor, wit, rhythm...well, it has it all.
Thank you for sharing! 😀

Posted 5 Months Ago


Bare trees

5 Months Ago

I'm really happy you liked it thanks.
ROFL!!!!! Laughin so hard here - funny as all hell!!!!

I think I know who this poem is for *ROFL*

Posted 5 Months Ago


Bare trees

5 Months Ago

I'm overjoyed that you liked it, thanks.
Scerina Elizabeth

5 Months Ago

Anytime :)
Pretty funny.

And rather serious as well. The need to wear manhood so forwardly. And the challenge to maleness.

I might suggest changing girls to women. Man and girl can feel off balance in this context.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Bare trees

5 Months Ago

Then it will be done. I thank you for your considerate review.
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Gee
14, nice to read a wee bit of humour

Posted 5 Months Ago


Bare trees

5 Months Ago

I'm in shock! I didn't think anyone would notice this. Thanks for taking the time to read my meager .. read more
Simple and comical, I really enjoyed the last line.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Bare trees

5 Months Ago

HOLY MOLY I got a Kittencake to review. Thank you a ton for reading and leaving your thoughts.

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