After the Winter

Just testing this out, since I'm new to this. I wrote this when I was 9 or 10 for an assignment.

Winter leaves Spring comes,

there melted snow lays nicely

with blooming flowers.

since I had time on my hands, I decided to draw this to go with it. It was drawn in Sai.

Reviews

[L.P.Greene]

Short but sweet. Definately the picture added to the effect of your words. Adorable! Keep writing. It will be great to see your style define itself over time.

[M.A.Rathore]

The poem is the best example of the description of nature with lovely message to deliver. The painting also make your poem more emphetic and a geniune piece...Keep writing....