I am the Stranger

This was my attempt to construct a poem using 10 random words: Stranger, skin, rhyme Calculating, Chickens, hurry, short, Obedient, remember and explode. This was a quick attempt, quite rough.

I am the stranger,

Under your skin,

Grabbing the rhyme,

Remember me then,

 

Life is too short,

So hurry we must,

Calculating chickens,

Obedient in trust,

 

Waiting tensely,

Prepared to be bold,

To drown in the passion,

or let it explode

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

I think you did an excellent job here; just flows off the tongue. Glad you gave this contest a shot!! Kudos

[Eddie Davis]

Thank you.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! This is not an odd poem, Eddie. This is excellent! Did you submit it in the said contest?
Congrats for a job well-done!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Here is the link:
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/10-Words-I-Give/52908/

[Eddie Davis]

Thanks, Dhaye, I just submitted it.