LET ME....

Retrieved from the archives. Written in 2003 (Writers Without Borders) Shakespeare Room

  

               LET ME BE ...

a pleasant memory passing by

with touch of summer breeze,

laughter that swells up as you lie

            back and are at ease.

LET ME BE ...

the lips that tenderly smooth your cheek

when lines mar the beauty of your smiling face.

Let me be the one you can confide in when things

                        go wrong.

LET ME BE ...

a call away whenever you need a helping hand:

always be by your side to comfort and console you~

through thick and thin ~ whatever the mood you are in.

LET US BE ...

With each other always and forever ~ till the end of time!

Created in 2003 for publication in a 'Slimline' book called Shakespeare Memoral Room

Author's Note

Surprising what you can find when searching the "Archives"!

Reviews

[lightsong]

in my archives I find many pieces that leave me with wide open eyes, "what IS this?!" " who wrote THIS?!"😐 just few days ago I was editing an older poem, I couldn't believe how poor it looked in my eyes now, and still right now after I edited it, it needs more work!

back to Your poem, the sweetness of Your words touch me lovingly... it have a kind of Shakespearian touch, with Your own romantic touch, this kind of simple lovely pieces add smiles at the hearts each day...

[kitty]

I agre with you there Little butterfly. I look back at some of mine and say what were you thinking about girl? On the contrary with yours you have 'Blossomed' over the years. Must not forget to say thanks for a 'budding' review. Hope your Sunday is spectacular!

[Gee]

Ahhhhhhhhhh, that's sweet. Did you share this with your beau ????

[kitty]

Was a dreamer back from a wonderful holiday in the Caribbean! I dream on>>>>

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

LET US BE ...
With each other always and forever ~ till the end of time!

Maybe just now what I've read is called the destiny of true love. Isn't it? Great work!

[kitty]

A fairytale dream in most instances, but as i am a 'dreamer' ...I dream on!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You are a wise dreamer then....dare to dream more!

[kitty]

Yes....one day, maybe ...just maybe eh!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Chase one..................

[kitty]

Did and fell flat on my face!! Hehe!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Humpty dumpty sat on the wall.....Oh, please....

[kitty]

We could go on forever.....>>>.playing with words. Have a wonderful night!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Playing is good for health. Have sweet dreams!

[kitty]

Thanks. They call me a dreamer. Maybe I am! You too sleep tight....Tonite!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome & they are absolutely right. Tonight Twilight :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

surprising also, the closeness you can still feel with old loves...
the history binds in some way.

[kitty]

I sort of like going back to the archives ~ to discover. Thank you so much for visiting and a lovely review.