JUST A FLING

Clandestine relationship can be regarded as 'a fling'

                               JUST A FLING!

She was just a 'thing' from his past

One he knew would never last.

A wild fling ~ his plaything ~not worthy

                   to wear his ring!

Life coated her reality...

caught in a world that masks normality.

Fairy tale princess she deemed to be

A dream of romance ~ the sort provided free.

He took her over the hill tops ...showed her the plain(s)

nothing to gather, nothing to gain

Magical moment shared in nostalgia filled mind ...

could have lasted ~ if they were two of a kind.

Spontaneity was the game...

Oh, if only she could have shared his name!

Created @ 1.00pm Thursday 27th September 2018 

Author's Note

A little ditty. Wish I could have been more witty but here is enough to give readers food for thought!

Reviews

[lightsong]

"Spontaneity was the game..." I can say that too dear Kitty, it was following a feeling without thinking of anything but to enjoy the moments, no consequences, there is no harm as long as the two are walking in the same line, so what saddens me here that it seems that she loved him while he consider it as a "fling".

You know I enjoy reading Your romance and how You go into unexpected corners of it, Your ever young heart always so sweet to read and share with. BTW, You are witty more than enough ;)

[kitty]

I have the confidence of many of my close friends. Knowledge comes from knowing them. It is in knowing what some are capable of! I am able to share and see the funny side of things! Thank you so much for sparing time to review,'daughter' Have great week end.

[kitty]

Life isnt all it turns out to be but we are entitled to look at it through 'rose tinted glasses'. Make mistakes and enjoy spontoneity. Enjoy life while it shows favour in your corner! Have a great week end!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The feelings of any rejected lover it seems expressed in a rhyming ditty in the voice of a spurned woman. Men get spurned too as I know to my cost lol!

[kitty]

Just a silly ditty, based on true life to bring a bit of humour on page. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

[Chris Shaw]

Flings rarely last kitty. I too have friends that share. That sense of danger, adds to the excitement, adds to the spice. When the crash comes and more often it does, when the heat is taken out of the situation and the coldness and stark reality stands there barefaced and threatening of exactly what can be lost, most will recalibrate. I don't think the grass is greener on the other side. Only a fool would think that. Love your poem, it got my brain into gear this morning.

Chris

[kitty]

So true Christine is your assessment of this piece. We have 'regrets ' but can count this as an experience not to be repeated. Thank you for reviewing and giving feedback. Have a lovely week.

[Chris Shaw]

You too kitty and good morning to you.

[Neville]

sometimes, maybe it is better this way...better to quit while the going is good if ya can see it aint gonna work in the long run... enjoy it while it lasts.... a super little fling ya shared tho...

[kitty]

And life goes on eh! We cant hold on to what we believe is 'the Ideal'. ~ creates complications, if the feelings we have for another isnt reciprocated. Love is a two way thing ~ if it is to last.

[Neville]

absolutely longevity is the answer... and they say size dont matter N

[kitty]

I do believe that it really doesnt matter~ size that is!

[Neville]

good to hear.. there are far too many greedy folk around... :)

[A hare off]

I suppose if it wasn't meant to be, it wasn't meant to be but it seems they had fun finding that out. I really enjoyed this.

[kitty]

Live life. Enjoy it while can i say: it gors on regardless!Thank you for 'hopping' in!

[Carola]

love your "little ditty" .
wow to the words "life coated her reality" your wording is very creative & magical !!
cheerio carola

[kitty]

My muse sometimes 'gift' me with strange and often silly words that baffle even me. I get out of it by putting it down to poetic licence. lol!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Accepted and also marked as my fav.....Note down the name "SKY".... Simply wonderful prose!

[kitty]

Thank you so much, dear knight in shining armour! Thank you. Reaching for the sky ~ aiming for the stars!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Hahaha your most welcome my dear friend :)

[kitty]

My pleasure my liege!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

:)...........

[kitty]

Was unsure if this little piece was accepted so here goes1