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STRUMMING ALONG

STRUMMING ALONG

A Poem by kitty
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Putting order to my many poems in 'limbo'. found another to share.

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                       STRUMMING ALONG

Sweet melodies once strummed
   for maiden wooed by song:
she tuned in from far off land.

He bared his soul when she came along.
She listened in awe, attentively ...
for in a haze she pictured him so strong.

His intent was certainly not to stay
for later he would not give her 'time of day'!

He promised not anything: to him it was just a casual fling
           un alike they were, but for love alone
No regrets ... no  kindly acts to atone!

He came not with flair or social pagentry
just a princely heart and much galantry
He ignited a heart that had been broken
          he was the prize token!

The words he spoke were charged with love
              from within
with tunes played on guitar or mandolin.

She prayed to the Gods above that he in turn
              would return true love
that it would be their destiny ...to be together for eternity.


Created @11.00pm on Sunday 4th February 2017

© 2019 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
Would so like a "Spell Check" format.

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the grammar felt a bit rough in some areas. these lines are interesting:
"The words he spoke were charged with love
from within
with tunes played on guitar or mandolin."

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your frank review William. Much appreciated but in order for me to improve you must be.. read more
Trust is a key factor in every relationship and once our heart is broke it certainly is difficult to trust another. I liked the way it ended, with a prayer, destiny play a key role and only lucky few gets the best of all. Thanks for sharing it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


kitty

2 Months Ago

You are so kind Raj. Thanks for a lovely review.
I do like happy endings kitty and this has one. Now wasn't he worth waiting for after the first heart breaker? Some just like to play the field, while others truly do seek love. Good to see you posting. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

2 Months Ago

Good to see you here Christine. Been a sorting the pile of 'unfinished melodies' as you can see. Not.. read more
the second "he" certainly a keeper...the first one...well those who use should be similarly abused...
glad she found that mandolin player who turned out to be a real man with good intent.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

2 Months Ago

Indeed Jacob, the search for 'true' love can be a trying and often difficult one. The 'pairing' of t.. read more

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kitty
kitty

Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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