In the Blink of an Eye

In the Blink of an Eye

A Poem by SilentDreamer
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A sad poem about death.

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In the blink of an eye
A soul can die
A simple accident
A horrible crime
Either way you're dead
Leaving others behind
You leave and go beyond
Skies and clouds and life above
Tears fall in grief
To those who loved
To those who knew

To those who miss you

In the blink of an eye
A soul can die
Leaving others alone
In pain and truth
To realize you're gone
They give a cry
Wishing for you
To be here
To be alive
To wish apon a star


Yet in the blink of an eye ...
You did die

© 2010 SilentDreamer


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In the blink of an eye, many things can happen. So full of truth. Great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sounds great! It can make a great song too!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was really amazing! You had me hooked from the very beginning and this is one of those poems I want to reread and reread. It's truly amazing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That was really, really good, but now I feel like I'm going to die any time now. It's not pleasant.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is very true. it only takes split seconds to die.....very nice poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


very true, thats why it is so sad- reality can be one of the worst things to face, but the best things to write about. nice poem, it flows very well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great poem. Its so simple yet it's message is so powerful. Inspiring :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


OH! This is beautiful and the picture is awesome you did a nice job on this! Very descriptive and such a sad unexpected ending!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice poem.
It's so true, people die in a blink of an eye.
Good job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is a great peice of art, its beautiful, captivating, the poem is amazing. i think its fantastic :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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