In Which I Completely Surrender My Heart to You

In Which I Completely Surrender My Heart to You

A Poem by MiaIntheSkywithDiamonds
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For those who have nothing more than love.

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In Which I Completely Surrender My Heart to You


Nothing I'd like to see more than your smile

I'd go every inch, every step, every mile

And if you weren't there at the end of my path

I'd wait in sick misery for you to come back

I'm sorry I sound possessive and crazy

It's just that you're a little impervious and lazy

But what if it worked in the end somehow?

The beginning's in sight for those who try now.

Here's just another complicated

Concept of her life, asphyxiated

By the tears in her lungs

And the rope that she's hung from

Some birds learn to fly when they jump out of the nest

I find that falling for you is what works the best

Ten seconds to impact and five to touch down

And everything comes back around and around

The pain is frustration I can't make a sound

Consider it my resignation once I hit the ground

But what if it worked in the end somehow?

The beginning's in sight for those who try now.

Here's just another complicated

Concept of her life, asphyxiated

By the tears in her lungs

And the rope that she's hung from

Sarcasm's not the solution

Involved with the cardiac contusion

Bruised, never broken

Is like thought and never spoken

I'm sorry I cry so hard I bleed

But I hold my tongue so I won't plead

For you to take me back

And give you a heart attack.

But what if it worked in the end somehow?

The beginning's in sight for those who try now.

Here's just another complicated

Concept of her life, asphyxiated

By the tears in her lungs

And the rope that she's hung from

And if you so desire

I'd leap into your fire

I promise I won't love you anymore

And while I toss away these old pictures my heart can't take

My breath gets caught, I just can't take

The thought of you being happy without me.

But what if it worked in the end somehow?

The beginning's in sight for those who try now.

Here's just another complicated

Concept of her life, asphyxiated

By the tears in her lungs

And the rope that she's hung from

I couldn't stand to lose you like this

I couldn't stand to lose you like this

I couldn't stand to lose you like this...

© 2011 MiaIntheSkywithDiamonds


Author's Note

MiaIntheSkywithDiamonds
Once more, just be honest.

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I love this so much. I can really feel the emotion that is sent through your words to the reader. I could definietly feel it. Very well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this. I like the emotion in the beginning, almost speaks directly to me. "Some birds learn to fly when they jump out of the nest/I find that falling for you is what works the best" -Very good line. I like it a lot

Posted 13 Years Ago



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MiaIntheSkywithDiamonds

Belmont, CA



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College student here, hit me up if you need to talk or anything else. I have a sincere love for life. I can get crazy, I can go downhill in a hurry, but when it comes down to it, life is a truly b.. more..

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