Gun and Bullet.

I don’t know what it is about you. 

Most people wouldn't stick around. 

And you know that. 

But there is something in you, 

that gives me a sense of hope. 

Perhaps happiness. 

When you and I talk, 

it feels like the largest catastrophe. 

But then sometimes,

there are other times where it feels like the planets,

are somehow alined so perfectly, 

that nothing can go wrong.

It’s like, you're the one behind the gun. 

But also the one dodging the bullet. 

Reviews

[Robert Strzalko]

It's well written and easy to understand. I think the ending is strong and it brings out the title, obviously. It also has a sense of mystery to it.

[Thaddius]

The duality of victim perpetrator in a relationship. Such a strong thought. Again, impressed with your brainpower

[Mily]

Thank you, your comments really made me smile. After having a rough day, you need some smiles. Thank you for bringing the sun with your kindness. It means everything.