red dawns

red dawns

stoic trees

wait for winter

filaments of logic

veins in the leaves

vain in leaving.

erin-cilberto

9/18/18

Reviews

[steppenwolf]

Again, it's economical to the max but says many things.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Leslie.
j.

[steppenwolf]

You did it again...

[Jimmy Yetts]

Always creative; always surprising.
Wit with considerable insight.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jimmy.
j.

[Chris]

So many leave with the seasons
and so few stay the course...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

true....thank you, Chris.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You thrill and delight with such finesse, J. Happy Autumn!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelly...
j.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Oh my..excellent..

One of your best..........................

Jazzy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jazzy!
j.

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome............. Great Write !!!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this Jacob never disappointed yet

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie...
j.

[Paul Bell]

This is me.
Winter is coming.
Find me a hot country quick.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love that..."find me a hot country quick"

thank you, Paul

j.

[Neville]

I see a carpet of fallen red maple leaves.. this is a great write in its own right and don't need no other colour.... Best.. Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Neville.
j.

[Neville]

pleasure.. N

[andrew mitchell]

I see autumn and people, but
puzzled by the line vain in leaving! But that's just me! Never could do cryptic crosswords either!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

logic over heart, vanity...

thank you, andrew.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you .......

[jacob erin-cilberto]

something like that anyway---and the play on words---leaves can be stubborn, people can be stubborn.
thanks for reading, my friend.

[Chris Shaw]

I have this vision of the beautiful red leaves of autumn clinging on for all they are worth, yet in the knowledge of the inevitable. People can be like that too when they face death. So much meaning and imagery Jacob in so few words.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for understanding, Chris...yes, people, much like those leaves.
j.