Pretty baby,I do love you,keeper of beautiful dreams

Pretty baby,I do love you,keeper of beautiful dreams

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess
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In the world of love

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You left me in a world new to me.
A  world I fell into.
I cry  in this world- for all to see.
Lonely nights.
I want to hold you.
I want to spend my  life with you.
You brush me of coldly.
Like ice.
Icy breeze.
Hits my face and my heart.
Turning to ice.
Icy tears break upon the ground.
I want to hold you.
I do love you.
More than all the world.
I want to hold you tight.
I met you .
I knew you were my endless love.
Lovely   eyes.
I see do they love another?
Let me be her!
I'm at mercy of love .
I  lay down my  life.
For my  chance with you.
I do love you.
I want to hold you.
For all my life.
My diary says clearly ,that I want to spend all 
my life  with you.
That's all I need.
I do love you.
For all  my  life.
Lonely nights.
I cry  with the stars listening.
My heart is breaking into pieces.
I'm the maiden of the starlight of beautiful dreams.
The keeper of beautiful dreams is me.
Your my dream.
I wish to come true.
Dose he know how much I love him?
Star, star up in the sky,
I ask this tremendous wish of love.
May I have my love?
Never to be alone.
Lovely night.
Lonely nights go by.
Terrifying dreams.
Nightmares of my heart come everynight.
My life is hell without you.
I do love you.
More than all the world.
I want to hold you.
I fight by your side.
For always.
Always by your side.
A scream at night, another nightmare.
One after another.
When will this end.
Pretty baby.
I do love you.
My love.
Angel eyes my love has.
My heart sings songs.
Birds in the realm of love sing of eternal love.
The love songs come from these birds.
Pretty bird up in the sky bring to me a song to bring him to myside.
For all eternaty.
Pretty baby .
I do love you.
Tonight I'll dream of you.
I'll see you there.
Let me wake up with you holding me.
Loving me.
With all your heart.
You know I love you.
All in need is you.
I lay me down to sleep.
I lay my head full of tears down to the pillow.
Goodnight my love.
Sweet dreams.


© 2010 Fanciful Goddess



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what an amazing write I had to catch my breath a few times just to continue the downward flow I LOVED IT

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! I really loved it. It brought tears to my eyes because of how sweet it is and how much emotion is poured into it. Really Loved it!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Yes I very do like it. Its kinda like a song.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It reminds me of a song I heard, but I can't remember what it is. Again, your ideas are beautiful, but the way you execute it still needs some work. Biggest problem? Lack of stanzas. To the inherently lazy eye, it just seems like too much work. Stanzas and consider either taking out some lines or combining them.
Otherwise, nice work!


Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a very creative piece. You express alot of emotion through it. You describe feelings in simple words which is great. Keep up the good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Tags: Love, world, diary, dreams, poem, poetry, maiden, starlight

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Fanciful Goddess
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(ABOUT ME) Brandy Nicole Taylor June 27,1986 Brown hair Brown eyes 5"1" I'm 25 years old -------------------- (´-`).。oO( Oops I farted ψ(`∇&ac.. more..

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