Try

Try

A Poem by James Paulin
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Chofu

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Comfort needs able.

Who cares?

Learning new things is too hard.

Why bother with it?

Because!

Standing still is slipping back.

© 2009 James Paulin


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Wise wisdom in your words. We can fall into a hole with no way out. Better to go forward and hope we are going in the right direction. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really enjoyed reading this poem and your "read request" could not have come at a better time than when I published "Why try?" What an excellent answer to my poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very wise advise wrapped into a great chofu.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sometimes the simplest told stories/poems are the best, and this is a good example of that. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Exactly.

(chofu of wisdom)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 16, 2009

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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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