yellow

TETRACTYS POEM

sun

lemon

gold saffron

to Oz upon

banana, forsythia, hyena

caution sign, dandelion, center road line

bumble bee

canary,

buttered

corn

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great use of the Tetracty form. Congrats to you!

[A.Lee]

Oh, I like this one! Yellow is probably my favorite color and I love the things you chose to describe it with and the structure of the poem. Great job. I find that simple poems like this are often hard for people to write. You did great with it.

[Ferg]

Hyenas are yellow?? Nice one..........I'll have to come up with another color now!!

[Wicahpi]

"To Oz upon" i like that!
Canary yellow is so pretty, too.
Wonderful, as always!!