Kill Me Now

Kill Me Now

A Poem by audrie

I'm crying blistering tears
I'm leaking floodwaves of fear
Grappling for a lifeline
Just need some more time

Breaking apart at the seems
My soul's no longer pristine
your dark presence lingers
puncturing me with dagger like fingers

Clinging with hope
For a better tomorrow
Praying that you won't stay
Praying away goes the sorrow

Your crippling torture
gives me fear of no future
You're startling movements
Cause me so much confusion

So just kill me now
I know you'll know how!


© 2017 audrie



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I love this poem, nicely done. :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


A wild and dark journey in your words. The poem took the reader to places of torture and no escape. I like the ending. Direct and honest. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind review - it makes me feelo good to know that people are enjoying the read!
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Was a wild ride. Still a very good poem and you are welcome.
The dark side is gripping your soul, but it is also the driving force in your life. This is a good piece, but sometimes we must take a step back to look what you are writing.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

thanks for the review!
I totally agree with annie...negativity should not be allowed anywhere near your life..nice poem

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Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

thanks for the review!
If you think negativity is entering your life......throw it out.......as far as poem is concerned its really a very good write.....

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Posted 3 Years Ago


A haunting cry . Every time we allow a negative person take control over our lives we feel the same . My point...go down fighting rather surrender to evil.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

I agree with you 100 percent - and in this world today you have to keep fighting! Thanks for the re.. read more
This is soaked in fear, and I'm too frightened to read again

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Posted 3 Years Ago


audrie

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Cory!
Very dark powerful words that paint an unpleasant scene, but an important message.
Great write.

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audrie

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Ance!

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I am a social worker and an artist. I am by no means a professional writer but enjoy doing it now and again. I am all about peace, balance and harmony. Looking forward to reading all sorts of stuff.. more..

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