All There is But Memory

All There is But Memory

A Poem by Fate



The band reminds me of 
       you
Whenever I heard them
       play,
reminds me of how you
   look so good
playing that clarinet...


The phone ringing in
    the night
 reminds me of how
I fell asleep reading
your messages for me
so caring and loving...

Those pressed leaf in my
  old notes reminds
   me of how our 
 friendship started...

And those poems reminds
me of the burning love
 that we once shared
  perfectly etched
 between those old 
      papers... 






All there is but memory
       -Fate-
  September 8, 2015

© 2015 Fate



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This is so heart-touching!
"And those poems reminds
me of the burning love
that we once shared
perfectly etched
between those old
papers... "
Beautiful lines! You have captured the emotions nicely! ☺

Posted 12 Months Ago


Fate

12 Months Ago

thank you for reviewing my poem :)
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

You are welcome 😊
So touching, a softly spoken poem full of both love and heartbreak, I adore it, it's excellent, I can't wait for your next poem! My favourite bit is:
"And those poems reminds
me of the burning love
that we once shared
perfectly etched
between those old
papers..." It is so descriptive and intriguing, the remembrance of an old passion and immortality on paper is inspired. Excellent :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


Fate

2 Years Ago

Thank you:) I'm inspired to write a new one since you want to read my next poem;)
BlaqkShadow

2 Years Ago

YAY!!!! :D
Tenderly loving and beautiful, but how the words melt into an aching in the loss of love's light. Every glimpse feels so personal; so dear to your heart.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Fate

2 Years Ago

thank you for those inspiring words Mr. Froman :)
this piece is something really close to my.. read more
An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Can feel the beautiful love and pain through each line, dear Fate.
Fate

2 Years Ago

I'm grateful to hear that from you Mr. Froman :) thank you.
Poignant and endearing.
Is there anything sadder than faded love?
A work with which many will identify.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Fate

2 Years Ago

thank you for the review :)
I like this. The one thing I will say is it is almost too much to the point. Some emotional feeling, something other than simple action, a little depth. One or two more lines/verses could make this very profound. great last verse, etched, the emotions are written in the pages of the book that contains the past love. I want to hear more of how that love made you feel! why you miss it so. maybe that is the draw though!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Fate

2 Years Ago

thank you for the review :) I appreciate it.

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Fate
Fate

Philippines



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Hi I'm Fate..My parents gave me a long name so I cut it short.. Fate. But my real name is Francia Theresa Lianza Oliver. I am 21 years old. I just love writing.. more..

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