Hooker Lips

Hooker Lips

A Poem by Frieda P
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Pucker Up

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Hooker lips, slurping tips
sweetly 
water my blossom
lightly blush my style
feed me gently 
watch it grow
earthly girth is, key
filament reaches for the sun
let the raise 
shine down on me
then sparkle me
 like the moon
my delicious 
tropical forest
singly carpel my stigma 
plant a seed, 
watch it grow
pucker up, 
the winds a tease
in full bloom, my petals wet
 my nectar sweet, 
watch me 
blow
 juicy, 
red,
 ripened,
 ready kisses





© 2013 Frieda P



Author's Note

Frieda P
This is a shot of a flower from Psychotria elata, a small understory tree in tropical forests whose flowers are affectionately known as 'Hooker's Lips'.

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omg i think i went out with her once.. ! ..

i wonder if guys take longer over there when their peeing in the bushes

okay who said that, that was just wrong

you're welcome

okay now we have to rewrite the, instead of roses on my piano, id rather have, tulips, on my organ joke..

see.. there's never a break in comedy....... ..

so umm how much do these flowers charge for say like uhh.. an hour or so in a motel sex, i mean, six.. whew..

forget my lady, im getting those for me for valentines day..

okay thats enough this could go on all day

Frieda, this was funny, and clever and you know.. kinda sheckshay too ;))

seriously, great piece.. always fun and unpredictable, and impressive, to read one of your, flowery, pieces

welllll done!

:)



Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

hahaha, I think you've lost your way, get back on the insanity thread Antonio!



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Holy ... WOW!!!!! You know red's my favorite color. I see anything red, I want it, I go crazy, it has a hold on me like I cannot explain. This piece was just so captivating & beautiful Favorited!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


may be about a flower, but when the petals opened up i saw a prostitute...love for a night...those lips that can't be resisted.

engaging piece, you are so versatile with your work...always something fresh and new.


jacob

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very juicy, like cherries, sweet. If I was a bee I would be having a great time

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

haha thanks!
I like this type of poetry. The description open the door to imagination and nice visions. A woman had many tools to attract a man. A beautiful smile and lips can turn a man around. Very nice description in the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote, I thought it was one unique flower.
Wise & Sexy!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

thanks Tink, where ya been?
Prathama Panigrahi

4 Years Ago

My pleasure Frieda..off late I have been busy with my India travel! A bit of slow internet keeps me .. read more
Excellent job. :) Interesting name choice for flowers... XD

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Playful yes, my friend sent this to me, and I had to run with the hot lips! Thanks ;-D
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A seductrice with words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

;-) thanks for reading.
beautiful

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Glad you liked it stephen.
Flowers are such teases! I love the metaphor and idea of the flowers being sexually alluring. The flower's name is very politically incorrect now - perhaps it should be renamed e.g. 'woman who likes kissing' ?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Politically correct does not a good poem make, thanks!
very nice; well written


my grandfather (Mom's Dad) would have said they look like a puckered ducks butt.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

4 Years Ago

ha, if that were the name, i'd not have written a poem about it! thanks!

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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