Blow to Kingdom Come

Tongue in cheek, or wherever...

You take it in,

 a little at a time

it'd be overwhelming, otherwise

you linger

 in it's essence

you use all your senses

it tickles, it teases, it grows larger

up and down,

 the process goes

get to the head of it

                     you get the feel of it

You feel that stoke again

                                 yearning, throbbing, pulsating....

you whisper

                       'is it good enough?'

         rimmed with exhaltations

                            brimming with anticipation

you can practically taste it

 slow deliberate strokes

                              perch those castles in the air

it builds to a crescendo til 

it bursts forward

 a surged ascension

it's like an explosion, 

                   it whets the appetite

It's a climatic arousal

                     like a nuclear reactor

BAMM you're there! 

An orgasmic expulsion!!

You ride it out.

It it written....

The thought process of poetry

 is truly arousing,

 ...what?

                     you thought I was talking about

                                             something else?  Silly..... ;-)

Reviews

[KeeD]

it builds to a crescendo til
it bursts forward
a surged ascension - WOW!!!!

haha the ending .. the famous Frieda P. quirky humorous twist :P
I love the way you write you have such good control and command over words it's like when you set mind to paper you create magic.

[Frieda P]

Control you say? ha ;-)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Frieda! You sly tease.. making the tomatoes blush. Nice one. ;-)

[Frieda P]

O.O I've never seen a tomato blush! ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

i saw the title and knew instantly what you were going to do you're amazing and the punchline of course i knew it was poetry I also knew what you comparing it to XD keep going Frieda you're gonna hit sun1's sweet spot one day by just writing XD

[Frieda P]

Oh NOOOOOO I'm becoming predictable! .....and LOLOLOLOL!

[Deron Alexis]

no really that's a talent ever heard of the term eargasm?

[Frieda P]

hahaha I'll be sure to use that in my next write! ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

lol

[Antonio Valentino]

hahaha.. you have a great sense of humor

who doesnt enjoy a good twist at the end.. :)

[Frieda P]

ha I have no idea what you're even talking about! *wink*

[Antonio Valentino]

oh gosh i meant the little curveball at the end of the poem..

oh forget it.. haahaa

[Frieda P]

I think you must be thinking of something totally inappropriate, I take offense to that! ;-D

[Antonio Valentino]

hey and i totally represent that as well!

and im unanimous in that.. :0

:)

[Muse]

OMG YOU are a BAD girl...did your hands throb after penning this?

[Frieda P]

No but I did have a few smokes! ha

[Muse]

I would have too!

[Claire Twinn]

Oh how I wish writing poetry could be so orgasmic, or that orgasms could last as long as the pleasure of writing!

[Frieda P]

hahaha, now that made me laugh out loud!! YESYESYES to both. ;-)

[DIVYA]

I read it and then I had to go back and read it again. My dirty mind!
Must say very amusing and made me smile at myself.
Thank you Frieda for never a dull moment on WC! ;)

[Frieda P]

ha you went back for seconds...hmmm ;-)

[s y e]

Bahaha, very nicely written!

[Frieda P]

ha thanks!!

[s y e]

Welcome Mama F!!! xo

[Pax]

haha... the last part blown me away in a different direction ;)

[Frieda P]

hahah I'm glad it blew you away. :-)

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm down with the part about rimming

[Frieda P]

ha

[Lover Of Words]

HA very good i must say

[Frieda P]

Grazie, I try ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

:)