Crazy Like Me

Gypsy in my soul, mother in my heart

                                                    ...poet in my mind

tiny dancer,

              dancing to the rhythm of your words,

                           sweet music of pen prancing on paper

                                                               we crash into each other

purging all our happiness and woes

                                                 ... for all the world to see

I think you're a little bit crazy, just like me....

Reviews

[KeeD]

this is you. This is what I'd want you to be described to me as. wherever I go this Frieda will be remembered. A gypsy in her ways with a loving soul :P a mother and a poet by heart and mind. Basically Crazy like me :D I'm all those things, unfortunately i can't be a mother, ha.

[Frieda P]

Awh Kee, that's the sweetest sentiment ever, thanks so much! mwah x

[Peter]

Wow, this was an excellent poem
You dont rhyme much but thats what makes you different
and good.

Nice job

[Frieda P]

Ha I suck at rhyming, hardly ever do, thanks for the visit and review.

[Peter]

Harharhardy.... that's pretty funny. Welcome.

[Jack...]

Hmmm, this one looks happy...dancing about the page...tutu flowing in the wind for all the world to see. :)

Very nice Frieda. This does bring a feel good vibe this morning and it is truly welcomed.

[Frieda P]

OH GAWD, my tutu was showing! Thanks Jack....x

[Corset]

This made me smile behind my hand , big time, with all my teeth, perfect words.

[Frieda P]

Good to know you have all your teeth Corset ;-) Thanks so much.

[Corset]

all the ones I have :)

[redflutterby]

Why am I singing "Tiny Dancer" in my head as I read this. Happens to be one of my favorite songs. I wake up after a long rainy night to the sunshine of your words. Such a beautiful thing!

[Frieda P]

Hmm, used to be one of my favs too, so happy this brought some sunshine to your day! ;-) x

[s y e]

Woah, I loved this. It was short but it says alot. I guess 'less is more' especially in your case here, huh? Wow, loved the beginning, you just hooked me in. Dragged me.

Loved the structure of it. Haha, I loved the ending, this is kind of playful, I like it!

"Gypsy in my soul, mother in my heart
...poet in my mind"

I loved these lines, I was like 'Dayum, did she just say that?!' Hahaha. Awesome blossom lines, hun!

And then, we come to the ending!

"I think you're a little bit crazy, just like me...."

I think I'm crazy like you! I loved this line, it was like a fact, or a statement, cant make up my mind, haha.

Amazing, 100/100!

[Frieda P]

Ha yeah you know me, usually I have a lot more to say, but less was more here, love your review farfalle, you're the best love! xo

[s y e]

Ha, you mean ALOT to say ;-P Just kidding..... maybe!

You're welcome.....!xo

[Frieda P]

Lol, I never denied I had a BIG mouth! ;-P xo

[s y e]

Bahaha, I know you didn't, was just putting it out there ;-D xo

[Frieda P]

You don't do so bad yourself missy! ;-D

[s y e]

Ha, I know ;-) xo

[Frieda P]

Lol! ;-P