HEROIN Acrostic

Hell

Enraged

Reality

Outsourcing 

Intentional 

Nightmares

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

I don't know how I missed this one Frieda...maybe on purpose. I know how dark it feels and how deeply this subject cuts into you. If only a poem like this could end the nightmare, kill the beast, then words would be the truest of swords. You have captured the evil perfectly in your poem, it is just a shame you had to.

[Frieda P]

Heavy sigh here, thanks Jack, makes me wanna cry every time I think of it and it's never far from my mind, thanks my friend.

[Hanna]

Intentional, huh????JUst as I thought, YOU PIECE OF S**T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jack...]

Why don't you shove it up your a*s!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[s y e]

Get to hell Hanna. Stop being childish.

[Hanna]

You sure have spiraled downward! And for you and your family, it only gets worse from here. My children and I suffered enough from a HEROIN ADDICT! Now it's their turn to face a NIGHTMARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jack...]

You're the nightmare

[s y e]

Wow, sheesh WTF is your problem? GTF Hanna!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so so accurate!..................

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This is so very accurate, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Travis, took me forever to get this one right, but it needed to be written!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Indeed... great things take time.

[Lyn Anderson]

I am with you on this one. You could not have chosen better words for this.

[Frieda P]

Thanks KL, hits too close to home, I know the words too well....

[Pryde Foltz]

Not usually a fan of this form, but this piece is so to the point. You get to the heart of it. Brava.

[Frieda P]

It's not my favorite either but needed to be brief and get a point across, thanks Pryde.

[Scott Metro]

Clever !!
Very nice..the truth in just a few words.
Kudos.

Scott

[Frieda P]

The dark horrid truth, thanks Scott.

[Scott Metro]

Hang 'em.......

[Rita L. Sev]

Absolutely spot on, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rita, unfortunately true.

[redflutterby]

Well this acrostic is on the money and couldnt be more precise!! :-/

[Frieda P]

Sadly, I know, thanks Red. xo