Breathe Fiercely

Breathe me,

     feed my spirit, burn my loins

take me to that place

 I've never known,

  do that frenzied tango

 that fierce lovers do

if only for a night,

   or a million years

   moments are ephemeral,

     drapes are drawn

you may not know me, 

in the light of day

swift exits cause

    scarlet regrets,

don't let this rush slip away

 with wild horses flight

deep yearnings stampede

emotional ties,

forever after lasts 

but a twinkling in time

Author's Note

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Reviews

[redzone]

Hmmm, sensual.... not sure how to say this, but who in their right mind would want to do a frenzied tango in the night and not want to know you in the light of day??? Breathe in, breathe deep even if in the skeem of things it is only a twinkling in time... Janis Joplin, once sang, say you only got one day, you gotta call that love.. tomorrow never comes, breathe in, breathe deep... ~~red(drawingthedrapesclosedandbreathing)zone

Don't mind me Frieda just my disturbed mind wrapping around your poem.. then again perhaps it's because it's still winter and I'm wearing flip flops... er... ;0)

[Frieda P]

Ha, I don't know curt, crazy eh? Oh Janis, now she knew what she was singing bout, love her. Love the flip flops in the snow, you're the best, grazie mille ;-)

[Cassie]

mmmmmhhhhhhhh!!! I will not say more my teacher...haha

[Baby Ricochet]

Quite beautiful actually.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Baby.

[Jack...]

While I was in the neighborhood I couldn't pass up one of these always amazing poems from you my friend. Love floats on the air as I read this dream inducing piece tonight. And perfect timing for me because I am about to enter dreamland...wait...I am already there. This is gorgeous Frieda...soothing warm and filled with desire. A true masterpiece and so is the poem. The ultimate bravo to you. Amazing X 100

[Frieda P]

Glad you decided to make a pit stop Jack, grazie mille.

[icelandicblue]

Quite an intoxicating piece of poetry. Whether for a moment or for a millennium those moments coalesce into synapses of ecstasy that last forever in your memory.

[Frieda P]

Yes they do, don't they, thanks Anne, I like 'intoxicating' :-)

[lee von cleef]

Wild Horses, what a song, lost myself in the maze of its drape across my withers,
a song turned into a saddle , bridle ,open plains to send my hooves loping through.
then whooo..ah.! right back to you.

[Frieda P]

Ha I'm not sure if should call for help or jump for joy lee ;-) Those hooves smart ya know? Grazie mille, always love to read your reviews.

[lee von cleef]

poetic pens plot peaceful parallels,
perfect pictures performing pirouettes,
perforating proliferating pin pricks projecting ,
predisposition, presumption into the heart.
Blood Red.

[Frieda P]

Ha, you're amazing my friend. :-)

[Marie]

Even the best and last love love is only a drop in time...to have a wonderful can be as much as forever is worth...

[Frieda P]

True, you're a wise woman Marie, how's the cat doing?

[Marie]

She's doing fine. Still not able to push herself out the pet door, though I know she wants to go outside.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So sweet and tender and yet very sexy write. It warms my heart libido at the same time.

[Frieda P]

Ha good to know Dale ;-) Thanks so much...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure Moonbeam :)))

[redflutterby]

Breath fiercely...sounds like a good mantra to me. Live for this moment...embrace passion...lose yourself in ecstacy... whew. Your words rushed through me with power and demanded my attention. I'm.left with a sense of dazed amazement. What a ride... xo

[Frieda P]

I concur....I know you were dazed before that, you can't fool me Red ;-) I meant thanks so much my friend xo

[redflutterby]

Dazed and confused...ha!! Just the way I like people to think I am... lol!! But nothing gets past me...nothing!! Xo

[Frieda P]

Ha don't I know it Lucy! ;-) xo

[Sami Khalil]

You leave your readers breathless after reading amazing writes like this one. The joy lingers after the thoughts slip away...Bravo..................

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Sami, hope you're breathing again :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome muchly...:)....................