Let's Go For A Ride

Inspired by my boyfriend. We would always drive off together in order to escape reality.

Let's go for a ride, 
Just you and me.
If I'm with you,
I'll be the happiest girl you'd ever see.

We can go late at night,
Or early in the day.
To keep you forever,
Is all that I pray. 

Every night I go to sleep,
Thanking God to have your precious smile. 
Can't it always be like this?
Can't you stay for a longer while?

If it's the only way for us to be together,
Let us drive around forever and ever.
 

Reviews

[Cortney Lynn]

this made my heart ache. in a good way of course!

[Vatsayayana]

Hmmmm... we will need to get you a car that can travel over water and air. Hmmm... like the carebear clouds! Alright, all silliness aside... I love this.
Why is it that there are times I feel as if you've peered into my heart of hearts and taken all my dreams all my longings, all my soft sweet prayers of love and given them voice and light and sustenance?

I'm such a romantic at heart. A dreamer. A whisperer of prayers. I've longed for things for so long...
And you've given my dreams a voice.
You're a beautiful writer my dear. Just lovely.
Inside and out. I'm still smitten over those pictures! ~grin~
Please please please always send me new things of yours to read. They make my day!

[Rodwonder]

This would make for a great song... Good beat and rythm... Well put!

[Shadows of Sight]

Oh so sweet! I love the idea. I'd think sleigh ride though! :)
Nice work!

[John Sanders]

I concur with the first reviewer. Why can't I find a girl who feels this way about *me*?

This was a lovely poem. I liked it very much.

[Angel Bird]

Lovely poem. Love - the eternal essence of life!
Memories so very sweet, filling the loneliness between so yearned for encounters ...
You have a beautiful way of letting your feelings flow as words onto empty paper ...
Thumb up!

[Wolfwind Words]

Yes, i totaly agree! Keep driving, don't stop, don't open the door! Run out of gas somewhere romantic!
Thats what living is all about!
Great poem of love and companionship and good times.
Keep it up!

[saijinsong]

an idea easily expanded upon. take that ride, with eyes shut tight, breath drawn in, put down that pencil. feel. there are no rhymes on that ride, tomorrow decipher in writing the words left in the braille of those goosebumps

[T. R. Writer]

Aww, this is sweet. I wish I had a woman who felt this way about it. Good job and welcome.