Don't Go My Love

She is walking away and all i can do to freeze her is recite this poem ;)

DON’T GO MY LOVE

In this gloomy night,

I miss that someone by my side,

Who can just cuddle with me so tight,

I want that someone to be my bride…

 

Love of my life,

That someone I remember,

Your embrace for which I strive,

Yes I am the one,

Who you call Mr.Trembler…

 

Now I am gonna break my shell,

Bring out the best,

Will leave it to you,

Then in peace I’ll rest…

 

 

 

 

The one who promises,

You the world,

I am gonna turn,

Into a flying bird…

 

I’ll take you high,

In the sky,

This is the time,

Don’t say goodbye…

 

I might be crazy,

I might be dumb,

Your hand in my hands,

Makes me numb…

 

Now please stay,

Don’t leave me alone,

You have my heart,

Its not some clone…

 

I tried and tried,

It never helps out,

Stumbling upon one big tide,

My love for you will always be this bright…

Author's Note

Rhyming might not be that good..

Reviews

[smilempsn]

Rhyming was decent, I dunno why you think that its not good....
Well she's just LUCKY to have you, & you can captured her in your poem so well..

I liked following two paras...Sooooo much ^-^

'I might be crazy,
I might be dumb,
Your hand in my hands,
Makes me numb…

Now please stay,
Don’t leave me alone,
You have my heart,
Its not some clone…'

[Gaurav Walia]

Thanks a ton...God Bless :D

[smilempsn]

Same to you ^-^

[Prritiy]

love has been beautifully shown, liked it :)

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank u so much Prritiy... :)

[Prritiy]

welcome :)

[Virtuosa X]

I don't like that You doubt yourself Gaurav.

I like your rhyming here, and the pain lying between the lines. Nice job :)

[Gaurav Walia]

Aww.. not anymore my dear... :D

Thank you so much...

[Virtuosa X]

You're most welcome :)

[Hiral]

Very nice!!Keep writing!!

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank u..