Sun Path.

Sun Path.

A Poem by Chaos
"

My day at that beach.

"

Walking one early morn
Captivated by the sea
beaming with life newly born
lost in aqua-green.

Silenced by the magnitude
of her length and width.
Astounded by her fortitude
Her contradictions forthwith


Eyes drifting upward
Amazed by the beauty of the sun,
peeking up to say good morning
Feeling lucky to be the one

Nestled on the beach,
Pants rolled over knees,
Feeling the earth’s oven
Turning up by degrees.

Neptune playing with the sun
Capturing my blue eyes
A light trail leading somewhere
good, I surmised.

Meandering with purpose
Following the orange path,
Waves swaying rhythmically
Dancing on false glass.

Are these the paths
that sailors once used,
to find their way home
when taunted and abused?

The sun was welcoming
and said "go behind"
The excitement was building
Love and awe entwined


Stepping behind

the solar curtain at last
Embracing the moment

Serentity surpassed


Seagulls interrupting

the flow by their sound.
Returning to existence
sorrowed; glancing round

I stand,
brush the sand
back to its home,

Gathering

my belongings
I walk
alone.

© 2008 Chaos


Author's Note

Chaos
Ignore first line capitals. How are the images? The pic was taken at the beach I was writing about and the trail is the same trail that sent my imagination flying. The pic was taken by Christine King of "Keep Smiling" photography.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Dude, you already know how much I love this poem. It's great. The imagery is wonderful. Keep up the writing!!! Thanks for the aknowledgement.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I see you have a love affair with the sea. Being a retired US Navy man, I can relate. I wasn't born near any oceans, but I came to love them after spending so much time floating on them. Your images are clear and inviting, and I wanted to be there. A great job! Sam

Posted 15 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

436 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on July 16, 2008
Last Updated on October 6, 2008

Author

Chaos
Chaos

Boston, MA



About
Lets101 Quizzes - Fun Quizzes That's me in a nutshell. Marie more..

Writing
Wish I could Wish I could

A Poem by Chaos


Insecurity Insecurity

A Poem by Chaos



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


alone alone

A Poem by ~amanda~


A Pious Man A Pious Man

A Poem by Chaos


Rock Rock

A Poem by soulsearching