A Hope To Pass On

We live in an ordinary life,

we should make each day come alive.

Life is our diary of everyday,

and with the ink of our hearts,

we pour content each day.

We can making everything work

if we believe in ourselves

and treat others fairly well

as we should treat everyday

throughout our lives.

We are the stone masons
of our own destinies,
carving out presents
and future for ourselves,
our contemporaries and
our descendants.

Let's hope,
truly hope,
that the correct
knowledge is passed on
and is correctly
applied forthwith.

Author's Note

A collaboration with Brenda, a young writer that deserves a look by everybody who reads this work. I thank her greatly for her contribution and her choice of title.

Reviews

[Daniel Atkinson]

Simple language and a simple message are married beautifully. Just goes to show you don't need to be eloquent to write profound poems.

[Brad]

nothing wrong with a little hope is there?

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A stunning collaboration, love it loads :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Oh wow.......I am so proud of you guys! With the ink of our hearts, we believe in ourselves.....we are the stone masons of our own destinies.....let us hope that the knowledge we pass on is correct. Can I be next? please, please? :))) wow!

[brenda]

aaaw!:) you are really welcome !:) it was nice working with you and as for a review to this its magnificent and i love it !:)

[Rene Velez]

A poem of hopeful thoughts, nice collaboration...

[Judy Ponceby]

I love the message here. And the images of the stone masons rings clearly with me as my brother is a stone mason. A truly hopeful work. Well done! An excellent collaboration Brenda and Kenneth. :) I hope to read more of both of your writing.

[Dewella~Vintella]

This was very good, full of emotion and vision. Hope for a better tomorrow.

Great job.

Vinny~