Dead man walking

i wish the Almighty could hear my cries ..

Is this what they term as life
a treacherous path , full of strife .

Pushed to the shove , i know not what to do
Guess my nemesis is what i should pursue .

Time and again you have snatched away my dream
her countenance that always made my eyes gleam .

There is a limit to a person's suffering is what they say
if its true then why do you twist me beyond limits as if i am just a toy made of clay ?

distraught thoughts , disturbing memories ; what else is to follow ?
a dead man walking , i am already rendered completely hollow ...

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy Take Two]

Despair,
especially in love
is very unfair, but!
I would rather love
A dead man walking
Than a dead man

This was my choice
And it still is.

My advise to you is
when you know not
what to do.

Do nothing. Wait.
See it through.

All the best to you

Tai, enjoying your poetic voice

[*** Hey Jude***]

From a dead woman walking I feel your pain, and am sorry. If your nemesis is what you wish to give your heart to, you should feel free to do so. I'm hoping it's what will make a your "hollow heart" peaceful and happy; being exactley what you want and exactley what you need! ~ Judi

[Dani]

I think there are many feeling the same way, because you just wrote words I feel from my heart. Well done. You only live in this world once. Do it your way, if they don't like it then they don't have to be in your life. D

[deeps]

This is wonderful, Rhye was great and the flow.
Very well written

[Chassitie Linnaea Nicol..]

I GIVE IT A 7

[clauds294]

Wow this is amazing! it really has some deep emotions in here and I feel so pulled in to the writing. great job! Keep writing! :)