when I was just a little boy

when I was just a little boy

A Poem by New Dawn
"

being happy to be yourself

"



When I was just a little boy

I ran away to sea,

I thought I'd be a pirate

But it wasn't right for me.

I made the baddies walk the plank

And I captured lots of gold

But the waves , they made me sea-sick

And the water was too cold.


When I was just a little boy

I dreamed of Robin Hood

So I left my home to find him

In the Forest Of Sherwood.

I helped him fight the Sheriff

And made friends with his Merry Men

But I didn't like just wearing green

and so I left and then.....


I thought I'd be an Astronaut

And fly amongst the stars

See if the Moon was really cheese

And maybe visit Mars.

But the rocket flew so quickly

And the stars , they all were white

The Moon was made of moondust

Which tingles when you bite!


So I flew down to Earth again

and ran home for my tea,

Deciding maybe , after all

I was happier being ME.


© 2012 New Dawn


Author's Note

New Dawn
written for my nephew. reviews welcome

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very sweet and true......................when we are kids................we do so many things and enjoy it...and then continue to do new things.....................this agility, interest ..we should keep with us forever........................very nice poem...:-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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~ how sweet... and absolutely adorable... i'm going to share this with my nephew soon... i just loved the little boy poetic voice you wrote in... and that too so effortlessly... i can almost imagine my nephew saying this... he wanted to be superman, then spiderman, then batman... :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is light and precious! Perfect for a child or a grown up child! It reminds me of my son when he was little talking about all the things he wanted to do with no care or limitations.
"and so I left and then....." this line is so sweet because it sounds the way a little one does when they are going on and on and telling a tale.

Love the ending especially.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Baz
Aah, this is excellent. I really think this is a superb poem. The last versein particular is great. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love it and the rhyme scheme. Amazing write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very sweet and true......................when we are kids................we do so many things and enjoy it...and then continue to do new things.....................this agility, interest ..we should keep with us forever........................very nice poem...:-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely way it rhymes , full of adventure .

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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New Dawn
New Dawn

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I have always written to some extent. seem to be leaning toward poetry at moment. In my other existance I am a nurse , wife , mother of three. Just like to share and get back some constructive critici.. more..

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