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A Cute Love

A Cute Love

A Story by Hasventhran Baskaran
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A simple short story

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  I gazed at her for a long period. Her cuteness and adorable behavior had stunned me with awesomeness. She had a bright eye that was looking out for a happy news, a soft and moist lip that kept on smiling at me. When she stroke her silky black hair, I felt like the whole world stood still. She came near me and hugged me tightly. She slowly moved her mouth to my ears and whispered “Daddy, I want ice cream. Please don’t tell mom. She will scold me, ”.Her charming yet innocent behavior filled my heart with laughter and made my day.

© 2017 Hasventhran Baskaran



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aw this is so cute, I love!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Hasventhran Baskaran

1 Year Ago

Thank you. Feel free to read other stories too
awww....this is soo cute.....awwwwwieee!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ohh this is so sweet..! I really liked it.!! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hasventhran Baskaran

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot
When she stroke her silky black hair - the word 'stroke' needs to be 'stroked'

A lovely short but ice cream sweet read. :-)

Mark.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Hasventhran Baskaran

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the correction. :)
matrixmark

1 Year Ago

Not a problem. I always try to help others.

Mark.
This is so sweet. I loved it. Beautifully written I liked the little twist in the end. 😁

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hasventhran Baskaran
Hasventhran Baskaran

Rawang, Selangor, Malaysia



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