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A Poem by Hollywood
"

Remeber when we lied?

"

Remeber when we lied?

It was the time we drove around

& got high.

We stopeed at Hog's Whallow,

bought fruity drinks that were

later thrown out the window.

 

A silly lie that we were going out

to play frisbee golf.

How do you play that in the

dark?

It didn't matter since it worked.

We were never caught,

our eyes pink

& breathe harsh.

We were never caught.

 

 

 

© 2010 Hollywood


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This. Is. ME. exactly.
NICE job(:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tense.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



it was an important subject to teens: how you lie to your parents and sneak out to do the wrong thing. great job :]

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this,needless to say.
i like controversial subject matter.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As a concerned parent I must say that you should stay off the drugs...
J/K
But if my little girls did that... I would kill em.
Great stirring narrative and great description.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good growing up and having these wonderful carefree moments before we are at the age of responsibility and we have less of these wonderful moments. Great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love the detail in this. hogs whallow, fruity drinks, frisbee golf. this poem tells a story - one we can all relate to about those brief glimpses of freedom from our parents when we're jsut out being us. i like this. thank you for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It has this feel of calm and love. It really makes me feel like I am at Hog's Whallow;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A simple narrative of the type of memories most of us have. Deceiving parents and all that. Very relatable.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ha, I think of some of the ridiculous excuses I passed by and wonder if my parent had just given up. LoL. Nice poem. Frisbee Golf is fun BTW.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hollywood
Hollywood

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