Food For Thought.

Food For Thought.

A Poem by hdc
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So I'm sitting here, trying to think the thoughts that I think should be thought.

Thoughts that I think would be sought by deep thinkers of thoughts. 

But then,  
I thought that deep thinking thinkers, who are seeking new thoughts, would likely be sitting and thinking those deep thinking thoughts that I thought they sought.    

© 2015 hdc


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humurous philosophy. makes complete sence. well done sir. well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


hdc

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. that's a nice Les Paul in your pic. what year is it ? hard t.. read more
Aero

8 Years Ago

Its actually an ec-1000 deluxe its an LTD
hdc

8 Years Ago

my bad, the body style is close. I've got a Les Paul, its an epiphone though, Can't afford a Gibson.. read more
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I love the play with thoughts. Thoughts are clouds in the open sky of pure awareness. You can actually see them coming. You are the navigator. Great work, dear poet :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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hdc

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind review.:)
Do not have the experience to identify the repeating pattern...but when I read it...it was fun and made perfect sense....

Posted 8 Years Ago


hdc

8 Years Ago

I glade you enjoyed it, thanks for the review.:)
I wish that I could write poems like this someday.
Brilliant! :) :) :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


hdc

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :)
I love the wordplay in this. There are shades of 'the vessel with the pestle is the brew that is true' and 'don't pick the prickly pear with the paw, when you pick a pear try to use the claw' and even 'face piles of trials with smiles; it riles them to believe that you perceive the web they weave'.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's beautiful and terrifying at the same time.

Posted 8 Years Ago


hdc

8 Years Ago

thanks for the review

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Added on December 19, 2015
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