Adhesive Affection

Adhesive Affection

A Poem by Nadi
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Haiku poem

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I found you broken

I put you back together

My sticky tape love


© 2010 Nadi



Author's Note

Nadi
I attempted and most likey failed at a haiku. It's for a contest that says to write a haiku about the one you love.
I hope she reads it, I hope it doesn't upset her.

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Why on Earth would anyone be upset about such a charming write, my friend?
Lovely

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

. it's beautiful ... i love it ... i don't think you failed at a haiku ... you succeeded in writing a beautiful senryu ... (the technicality specialists say that haikus need to have some element of nature but i'm not one of them) ... :) ...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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so cute :)

Posted 2 Years Ago
Good attempt at a haiku. Because they are so short, a lot of meaning must come through techniques like tone, voice, sound, and sense. Try using some sound techniques like alliteration and assonance to really smooth out the meaning.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

>.< gahh! I looooveee it!! im not upset!! -huggles-
And you dont fail!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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